Unscientific Scientist From Sunagakure - Chapter 191
A great disaster was averted under Altair’s universal phenomena.
Altair’s earth-shattering power was so miraculous that everyone forgot about the substitute.
Kabuto’s miserable defeat was somewhat unjust.
The White Dean was fighting against three souls and three minds.
In fact, with the White Dean’s abilities.
If used properly.
He could have subtly turned the entire village into his followers and children.
Ordinary ninjas wouldn’t stand a chance.
Of course, that wasn’t Muzake’s intention.
Saving people was enough.
Any additional abilities were just a bonus.
Another piece of good news.
Kimimaro’s incurable disease, which even Orochimaru couldn’t solve, was cured by the substitute.
Or rather, his disease became the substitute.
This matter will be discussed later.
The Dragon Vein’s energy returned to its peaceful and gentle state.
So, construction continued as planned.
Muzake continued his duties as Kazekage in an orderly manner.
The industrial construction of the Land of Fire in Konoha also began.
A month later.
Muzak was in his office printing documents.
Secretary Kurotsuchi came in with a stack of files.
Muzake smiled and called out, “Perfect timing. Help me check out my novel.”
Kurotsuchi was very surprised.
???.
When did Kazekage-sama have the ability to write novels?!
Muzake handed the freshly printed manuscript to Kurotsuchi.
“Here, take a seat.”
Muzake pushed Kurotsuchi onto the sofa.
He diligently served tea.
“You’re my first reader.”
“Give me some feedback.”
“Do you think this novel will be popular?”
Kurotsuchi picked up the manuscript and saw the title.
“The Story of an Invincible Princess Reborn in Another World Creating Ninjutsu and Dominating the World”
Subtitle 1: Altair’s Ninjutsu God Revealed.
Subtitle 2: Re: From Invincibility in Another World.
Subtitle 3: Wind Princess and Hero’s Fame Record.
Subtitle 4: …
Subtitle 5: …
Kurotsuchi
(???*).
What a bizarre title!
My hands are not long enough to touch my head.
Even as a literary enthusiast, Kurotsuchi asked.
“Master, what is this about?”
Muzake: “It’s the story of Princess Altair descending to the world, creating chakra, and bringing ninjutsu to the world.”
The more settings added to Altair, the stronger she became.
Muzake thought he might as well write it himself.
It is directly attributing ninjutsu and chakra to Altair.
When Kaguya or the Otsutsuki clan arrive, they’ll find a true Ninjutsu God and Chakra Origin God here.
Muzake was quite satisfied with his painstakingly written novel.
“Quick, read it.”
“Give me some feedback.”
Kurotsuchi had no choice but to start reading.
After flipping through ten pages, she finished.
Kurotsuchi: “It’s so short?”
Muzake: “Short it is, but is it good or not?”
Kurotsuchi straightened up.
“Master, do you want the truth or a lie?”
Muzake also straightened up.
“Of course the truth.”
“Don’t worry.”
“Speak freely, I won’t get angry.”
Kurotsuchi then unleashed a storm of criticism.
“Let’s not mention the length.”
Muzake??.
Can we not use the word “short”?
The richness of the language.
You can describe it as concise or condensed.
Kurotsuchi: “First, the title is not good.”
Muzake: “Why?”
Kurotsuchi: “First: Why do you need so many titles? Who taught you this?”
Muzake mumbled.
Wasn’t it a test title?
Then, trick one person at a time.
Kurotsuchi: “Secondly, look at the best-selling books. They all have four-character titles, like ‘Make-Out Paradise,’ ‘Make-Out Violence,’ ‘Make-Out Tactics.’ Only four-character titles can become popular.”
“Your long title is too strange; it definitely won’t be popular.”
Muzake.
???
I didn’t expect you to be like this.
“How many volumes have you read?”
Kurotsuchi opened her mouth,
Then.
?????°
She quickly waved her hands.
“I haven’t read them, really haven’t.”
“Master, please don’t misunderstand.”
“I’m not that kind of person.”
Muzake: “No misunderstanding, no misunderstanding, I’m not that kind of person either.”
Kurotsuchi, blushing, changed the topic.
“Second, your novel is full of typos and missing words. Points deducted.”
Muzake~(´•?•`)~.
I was typing too fast.
Thoughts too wild.
Not good either.
“Third, the numbers you wrote are simply ridiculous and illogical. How can a 120-meter long iron bar weigh only three tons?”
Muzake
(´??)y??~~
What was I thinking when I wrote that?
Forgot.
Haha.
Next point.
“Fourth, the fights are so boring. The protagonist is invincible. Every time they meet someone, they shout a skill, and the enemy falls.”
“From beginning to end, no one lasts more than two seconds in front of the protagonist.”
“This is too fast, too predictable.”
“And you never kill anyone. How can it be exciting or impressive without killing?”
“Don’t you know about leveling up by killing and looting?”
“If you really can’t, write something with a bit of color.”
“Do you know what’s most important in a novel?”
Muzake (^_^)?
“What is it?”
Kurotsuchi was serious.
“Of course, it’s an interesting story with suspense and fun.”
“When the reader finishes, they should feel something.” S12
Muzake: “What kind of feeling?”
Kurotsuchi couldn’t describe the feeling exactly.
She gave an analogy.
“It’s like when I read ‘Make-Out Paradise.’ I might forget the characters’ appearances, heights, actions, and lines.”
“But the feeling of excitement stays in my heart.”
Muzake: “Is that feeling warm? Do you need to get up and drink water at night?”
Kurotsuchi glared at Muzake with killing intent.
She hit him with the file folder.
Muzake
|??)?.
“Hey, we agreed not to get physical!”
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